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This Week’s Challenge…
…the door opened and there it was…
- What is ‘IT’?
- Where was the door?
- What are you doing there?
- What happened next?
Do make sure you use the prompt as it is written please and try to get as near to 100 words as possible.
Entries must be in by Friday 16:00
Creak…Creak..The wooden door peeked open a few inches. Alfred grabbed his baseball bat—got from Babe Ruth himself. The American got in position in front of the door, ready to bang his bat right on the intruder’s face. Or Ivan. Or even Arthur’s. He inhaled until his lungs were full. Exhale. Inhale. Exhale. The door opened and there it was.. The white blob with a single strand of blonde hair perched on its head. Sky blue eyes reflecting the moonlight. It bounced closer to the American, its army of other blobs right behind. Alfred squeaked (not like he would admit it but I’m the author so hawhawhahaw) They charged right at the blonde, drowning him in white. He was never to be seen again.A/N: hawhawhaw forgive me Alfred forgive me
Star good job I like how you use adjective action verb.
I cried form laughter after reading this XDXD “Alfred squeaked,” XDXD
Good job STAR!
Hi Star (G6)
I really love how you are using short sentences to create effect. Can others try and do this too?
Don’t forget to add your name and Grade Number
How to spell T.Ben big name I need it for spelling city I download it.
Yes, people can try this effect, I don’t mind people using it 🙂 it’s a style of writing that creates the “effect” so of course everyone can use it and I just realized that I forgot my name and grade number whoops
It was a peaceful day to find new pokemons. I find a wild pokemon call Seadra. I choose you Charzard use flamethrower. Seadra fainted now I can carry on my amazing,and fantastic trip to find the legendary pokemon Mew two! After a long walk for 5 hours I found the mystic templeof legendary pokemon Mew two but there a legendary pokemon blocking the way in the pokemon is call Grodon! I say wow now how can I get pass it oh I got it to catch them all so I throw a master ball at it and capture it yay! The door open and there it was the legendary Mew two! To be continued…………..
By Gus G.4
great job GUS I like how you use cartoon character and i like how you use to be continued
ozone G3/1
great job GUS I like how you use cartoon character
ozone G3/1
I agree with Ozone, Gus! I like how you used familiar characters in your story. You also used great WOW words, like “legendary.” Next time, try to use different WOW words instead of repeating the same ones over and over.
Same like Ozone and T.ANNA I like when you use the cartoon character!
To begin with a girl named Katty, Katty lived with her grandmother. She always get some minerals to make food. Every day Katty get the minerals from the farm.”Can I have some minerals for my food”. Moaned Katty. One day Katty heard a knocking down stairs. Katty went down stairs and the door opened and there it was no one. Suddenly the door knocked again and Katty opened the door. Katty saw a ghost so Katty call her grandmother and her mother help get the ghost away. Finally the ghost went away.
Well done Jessie, it is great to see you using different ways of starting sentences, like to begin with, one day and suddenly. Keep it up!
Not so long ago, there was a little girl named Cookie. One day her mom need to go to some where, so her mom said do not go down and open the door under the house! Then her mom began to live and so she stay at home by her self. When Cookie go under the house to get her toys she hear a sound of someone knock the door she quickly go up the house. In one second she heard a loud knock at the door again so this time the door opened and there it was… A cute little bear! So, she invited the bear to come in the house. When her mom come back she said to her mom that this little bear don’ t have home so her mom said you can keep this bear so the girl keep it. by Prim G.4
Prim great effort. Like how you put connective .Next time use more wow word.
I like your surprise ending, Prim! I definitely expected it to be something much scarier that was making the noise. Next time, check your verb tenses.
PRIM great effort!
One upon a time, there was a boy name Non, he lived in a gigantic house and he learn at the fantastic KPIS school. When morning the door opened and there it was, T.Mac working hard on his desk grinning like a cat! Then, I walked in the class…. J.B jumped like a frog and scared me. When I sat down on the beautiful chair and there was… People’s hand under my table! I ran as fast as a bullet down to the awesome hall- way. There were zombies everywhere! But then I found out, it was just a trick day! Non Gr.3/2
Perfect Non it is funny also I like that you say say J.B jump up like a frog
And scared you.Keep it up!
Well done Non you have make a nice job I like when you use “…” and when you use ” J.B jump like a frog” next time don’t have to use the name all the time you can use him,his and he.
KEEP UP NON!
NON! I like when you said JB jump like a frog!
cool
Surprisingly through the door , I was shocked in opening the door when I saw a river outside our door. The door was in front to our garden. I was there because my friend said I have to go get some sand to make our project. We enjoyed playing outside and spend the time doing our project outside our door with the nice river nature.kana G3/2
Kana, great effort but you must include the exact prompt “the door opened and there it was”.
T.Mac sorry I for get the word the door open and there was.
Keep it up Kana I very like how you use lot of wow words that I do not know yet can you teach me to tomorrow .
Thanks you T.mac,next time I will be careful of my work
To begin with, I was at Keerapat International school in the massive playground, that time was in 3 o’clock and there were only some students in the school, but not a lot students. The sun was rising down, my friend named Mealodie and I was drinking water, but I had to go to the toilet, so when I try to open the door, but the door opened and there it was a people inside and then I screamed because I thought that it was a gost, however it was just a made and my friend run as fast a cheetah and I went home.Gaeun G3
Gardner keep on doing that and you will be the winner of this week Challenge.
Dear Gaeun,I love when you use WOW words and a smilie,but you can start by using ING starters.But it is still very GOOD,and get well soon.
From Man U Grade 3 A long times ago in London there was a man who giving some peoples a job to do if anyone finish it that man will give every thing that they witches. One day there is one child from grade 9 he is very good at sports, learning and survive he walk past a shop and close to that shop there was an old man sitting beside the shop. That old man threw down the massage on the floor when the child pick it up it is a mission to do if he complete this mission he will get 1000 millions$. The mission is to collect 10 bombs in London in 96 hours. In 72 hours he collect 9 bombs. He going home to sleep, there it was behind the door… A BOMB!
Man U good job for making it interesting.
I am at my house walking around.It was not quite fun,but it’s still okay,I walked untilI found a door,the door opened ant there it was a friend,he looked nice,but at first I don’t know anything about him yet.Another thing in the door was a room for playing,I didn’t know that I had this room in my house,so the friend said that this is a magic door,this is where I live.I didn’t even know that he lives in this room.Inside,the playing room was big with toys and a giant slide for kids and teenagers and also an air house for playing ,so me and the friend play in there and we played the giant slide,it was so fun,the friend said that he had to go know now,so I went out of the room and said good bye and the door disappeared.
Winner it is magical but if you add some wow word and may be it will be
more amazing.
Wow, Winner, this sounds like so much fun! I love your imagination! Next time, make sure you put spaces in between your punctuation: i.e. “we played on the giant slide. It was so fun. The friend said…”
One scary night there were a house that have a clown that eat people and there are one team that kill monster and ghost the team call ghost buster. The next night the ghost buster went to the house and went in the scary house that the clown live. When the team got in the door close by it own when they are walk their are not thing. when they went at the end of the house their was a door it was lock. Suddenly, the door opened and there was it the clown the clown laugh and eat one of them now they have three the clown eat and eat and now they have one and the person is the boss he use gun shot into the clown mouth. Now the clown is dead the people live happily ever after!BY:ROOK G.3/2
Rook good use if wow word but try to make the story more true.
I like your story it was so scary. And I like where you wrote ( The door opened and there was it). But next times be careful with your capital letters.
Cool story rook but there are no wow word in your work. I like when you start you sentences like “One scary night”. And I like how you make your story scary like the clown eat people.
Good job,Rook next time try to use the simile,then it will be perfect.
Rook I like your story, it is fun and scary! I like your wow word and opener. Also try and use comma!
Rook your story, is so scary!
To begin with,a village that I live it was a nice village.lt was a proper village but the only problem was there were a enormous monster! the monster were killing all the people,the problem were started at last week,so we were all prepared to fight with the monster! we waited and waited, until the monster arrived.We all prepared with our things,but when the monster was coming toward me I was to scared so I ran away to hide at my home I hide next to the door ,suddenly the door open and there it was the horrible monster!by megan g3/1
Megan one thing that is very good form you is that you think a lot about it that why it is good.
Thanks Zoe
“Today is my birth day where’s daddy”I asked . Mom answered “He need to go the other country to has meeting”.”Then would has birthday party today”？”No we not beacause your daddy not here”.I m blue .I almost cry,then I when to my school that called keerapat school.Today is Friday September 30,2016 .I love the Luch today It is fantastic also break. At 2:55 my bus came .It has traffic so when home when it 6:32 I open the door it darkand a flash people open light everyone same time say “happy birth day “.My dad also here had wonderful party.G3/1 name :Zoe
Well done Zoe, Well done for using different vocabulary. Nest time, don’t forget to check all all of your capital letters and also you must include the prompt: “The door opened and there it was”.
Once upon a time there was a boy named Milo, he was very sick, so his family brought hime to the magnificent hospital, he had to go to X-ray to make sure that something was perfect, but it was not OK, there was a lot of disgusting germs so he had to have a quiet nap.Three days after he felt awesome so he went back to his huge home to swallow the bitter medicine, he tried as hard as he could.The medicine melted and it tasted very bitter. He tried so hard or ( hard-working ). Finally he could swallow it, he was proud and he went for a fantastic celebration, when he was there, he was about to open the door, but suddenly the door opened and there it was my best friends forever (BFF) and we played together as happily as before. Remember to don”t eat something WORST FOOD to don’t de SICK and be FRIENDLYWin Grade.4
I like your one because you. Make it exciting and has love in it.
WIN, I love your story its very nice!
The door opened and there it was , it was just as I had imagined , it shone as bright as the moon , it was teacher Anna’s magic school box . Inside this box was the whole years exam test papers & answer’s . Then , I noticed the box had a number on each side , it must have a secret to open it . Remembering my homework I . worked out the mean average of all the numbers and BINGO ! HOLLI G.4
It is a very good story but try to add some wow word.w
“Creak….” The door opened and there it was. The long lost precious golden stone. No one had every seen it since forever. It was right before her, with just a reach of her arm she could just touch it. But something was keeping her from touching it, she was trying so hard, she just couldn’t. It was something unusual, something she didn’t know. It was pushing her harder and harder, the force was so threatening it was beating against her chest, she couldn’t take it. She saw it, it was right there. The precious gold stone she was searching for her whole life.
Good effort ENJIE
Outstanding Enjie – as always! I am so glad it had a happy ending – I was worried for a moment!
I opened the door and there it was… the lost amulet of my dead father around the mans neck. *Flashback* My dad died back in the 1920 i was 13 back then when grave diggers dug up his grave and stole his amulet. I swore revenge on the diggers and devoted my entire life and money never to rest until I found those 2 darn cursed beings. I found the 2 in a small hotel room all aged and dying. I asked them “Where is the amulet?” ,but all they did was shaked their heads and passed away. But now there it was infront of me… it was around the mans neck who was dressed in full black he took of the amulet tossed it to me and said “Your time has come. You may rest in peace…” And with that he pulled out a revolver and pulled the trigger. I slowly started to fall toward the fall.. ,but was satisfied for i have kept my promise.
One quite day I wake up at 6:00am I went to bath and eat my breakfast. I went to school, I ran as fast as a mouse to school but I forgot my magic book, so I ran back home I find in my bed room, I find at the garden, I find at the kitchen, I find at the living room and in the bath room. It’s not there it’s not here. The door is open and there it was, it was in my secret room. So I went to school with my magic book to learn, to practice my dance and to get something from any where I want. At school I learn so many thing and my friends and I got to eat some blood it’s delicious. I saw some zombie and I use my magic book to protect me and my friend. Now I don’t forgot my magic book any more.G.3/2 RIS
I like that you use a lot of simile like what T.Mac teach use in L.A.
Thanks Zoe
I like your work Ris, because you use simile,I think next time you can use more adjective.
Good effort Ris, I like when you use a simile,but I think next time you could use ly starters
The door opened and there it was , it was just as I had imagined , it shone as bright as the moon , it was teacher Anna’s magic school box . Inside this box was the whole years exam test papers & answer’s . Then , I noticed the box had a number on each side , it must have a secret code to open it . Remembering my math homework I worked out the mean average of all the numbers and BINGO ! Holli g.4
That day you are very lucky.
Its nice when you add the door opened then there it was at the start of the story
Nice job Holli!
Long long time ago,when I was just 5 years old and always doing something that different than everyone and always doing things that no one care and know it so.., that why I telling you that I know what’s inside there! I explain “but that is a secret door!” my friend answer “but I don’t care,remember?! , trust me!” I scream ”ahh okay,oh dear”my friend say quiet.Suddenly, me and my friend are going to look outside the door and thinking that, does it going to be the same things that I saw when I was young or not.10 minute later……”I think it will be not,how about you?”I say “I…..think so”she answer …”just try!!”I scream “nooo!!” she scream, the door opened and it was upside down place!! then me and my friend fell asleep and that is end of us.By Many G.3/2
Many ever thing is perfect but next time may write only 100 word because it is a100wc .
Thanks Zoe,next time I will be careful of my work than this time.
Many this a good story.
Thank you so much,Kana.
Many I love your story!
I ran down the halls as fast as I could, running away from the behemoth that appeared from nowhere. I’m guessing it’s a spell though. I don’t know, but what I do know is that thing is chasing me and there is nothing I can do about it but run. As I was running I suddenly remembered a spell I learned long ago. I turned around, facing the monstrosity with my trusty wand. I whispered the spell and with my last word a fireball was shot at the thing, burning it to ashes. Now I can do what I was supposed to do here in the first place. I walked to the unidentified room. The door opened and there it was. The spell. The spell of creation.
T do what you do this time ever time.
GREAT JOB T
NICE STORY T!
One Spooky day, I was about to entered my beautiful car and a diamond sword dropped from the sky I went home and I researched the magnificent sword then I realized that nothing was there but I see a door I opened it…….I found strange stuff. Quickly, I grabbed my sword…..and closed the door the door open and there it was the army of soilders I won them. However, they will come back.
Pat it look like mycraf.
Pat G3
I thing this story is perfact story I very like your story.
Pat I like your story! I like your opener , also your connective. It is magnificent but next time try and use speech mark however, it is a wonderful peace of work!
I LOVE your story PAT!
Pat I like your story it so fun. And I like mine craft games that why I really like you story. But one thing I don’t like from you is your story is it too short. But you doing a great job Pat next times keep it up.
ha ha ha!!! to my story
One night I could not sleep, I was to excited to wait for my new pokemon, I want a Absol, Abra ,and Arcanine . I fell asleep at 11 o’clock that night ,I dreamed about a pokemon it was big, brave, and caraguse ,but then my mom woke me up it’s 7:30 o’clock ,I should me at the office by 7 o’clock! I rushed to the ofice the door opened and there it was my pokemon not Absol, not Abra ,and not Arcanine but it was a special one called Aron it was cut and brave and super strong. The next day me and Aron went to our jernie to the forest to get more pokemon like Aron THE END (Aighla G.4)
Aighla your is fun!
Prim G.4
Aighla your story is fun!
Prim G.4
Aighla your story is fun!
i like it.
Prim G.4
That so funny but I like it
I was alone in my house when I heard a knock at the door. Before I could answer, my phone rang. I answered it and it was Bailey. I interrupted her and said “Jump over the fence because there is a monster! Come quickly!” Bailey said “OK and bye-bye”. It was scary so I went to hide. The door opened and there it was… Monster!, I cried. Bailey, my friend took off her costume and when I realized that it was her, I told her that the costume was like real. We laughed and played all day long.
Phorjai G2/2
Sally was in her home, very excited because tomorrow will be Easter Hunt day! Then in the morning she did the Easter Hunt and there is 1 huge egg to find, but they have to look for it all around her large school. 3, 2, 1 so the race began students running crazzzzy every where. Some times later Sally was looking in the gym, field and the play ground, but in the play ground only Sally and Larry saw some thing inside the window of G.4’s room the huge egg. Larry and Sally ran, and Sally got it first! Sally had a good time.Patrick G.5
I like your work because it is funny and also I like funny.
Thanks Zoe
Nice story PATRICK!
Thanks Megan
To begin with, we were having a skavznture hunt and I have to find easer, banana and a old shoe but there are only 30 minutes! Firstly, I will find the easer, it said it’s in the tree. When I look all of the tree there were 1 easer but I still need to find the banana. In the map it said that there are only one huge rock and it under the rock! Also, the huge rock was behind me so I quickly grab it and went to find the old shoe. It said there will a farm and it’s on the in side of the door. Dashing for one hour, I went to the farm and the door opened and there it was, also the game end and I was very prod to my self. Finally, I live happily after again! CHATO G3/2 KPIS
Elsa was having dinner with her family. When she arrived at the new hotel, she was shocked to a wicked witch on her bed sleeping. So, Elsa froze the wicked witch and she kicked her down stair.
When the ice was broken the wicked witch was free then,she was mad so she made a curse to Elsa.
Soon after, Elsa saw Anna and she said you’re ugly. Then they had a big argument after that the curse was gone so Anna yelled to Elsa I won’t be friends with you anymore! Elsa was crying in her bedroom. Next, a stranger kidnaped Elsa then, the stranger had a diamond sword to kill Elsa she uses her ice power to freeze the stranger and they lived happily ever after.
IT all began when Orpheus was a children he loves song he loves to play lyre but one day Orpheus
saw a young lady named Eurydice. Orpheus was in love of Eurydice.One night they marry and the door open and there was a venomous snake the snake bite Eurydice ankle. Eurydice felt terrified
and soon she vanish. Orpheus rush to his lovely wife but it was to late because she is gone and the poor Orpheus. Soon he have an clever idea Orpheus rush to the under world to hades and hades give Orpheus wife back.But hades have a Warning don’t look back if your not out of the underworld yet but Orpheus didn’t trust the god so he look back and Eurydice disappear.
By Prod G.4
To start with, a mouse knight called Geronimo Stilton when he was at a horrifying castle. he stared up at the looming monstrosity before him, he realized something equally horrifying. His feet weren’t resting on the ground but a layer of gray cloud that, like a drawbridge, were connected to the castle! There was no doubt about it. As it was illuminated by bolts of lightning , he realized that the castle was entirely made out of spinning air! It created steep high walls , peeked by spires of snow and ice. The towers were made of swirling hail, the roofs of black clouds, and the windows of thin sheets of ice. the door opened and there it was the house of horrors.
Mickey G.4
Once upon a time there was a girl name Medusa she is so pretty and kind she had a lot of friend. One day Posiedon saw Medusa he love Medusa but Medusa don’t like so Psiedon follow Medusa when Posiedon huge Medusa Athena got mad so Athena turn Medusa hair into snake hair and when Medusa look at someone they will turn into stone .Medusa don’t want to turn anyone into stone .Medusa don’t want to turn anyone into stone so she hide in the cave that no one can turn into stone. Every time people want to kill Medusa because she is dangerous but before they kill her they turn into stone because they look at Medusa and the door open and there it was new statue.
Nice Pream. I like how you use Greek name like Medusa and Poseidon.
One fine day, a girl named Jessica was playing in the forest. When suddenly, she saw a rattle snake. She ran as fast as she could. But her little sister appeared. Her little sister’s name is Bambi. Jessica’s sister did not listen. Then when Bambi looked back, there was a rattle snake. Bambi ran as fast as she could and held Jessica’s hand. They saw a similar path. They were in the house. The door opened and there it was, the rattle snake! They both ran into the room then locked the door. Then their dad came and they were lucky because their dad was a snake hunter and their dad killed it. He killed it by squeezing its neck and it died.
By Mynie G3/2
Good job Mynie keep on doing that.
Great job Mynie I like your work because you use simile and you use capital letter correctly.Next time do more excitedly okay Mynie.
Well done, MYNIE I like how you use your beginner like : One fine day, and suddenly. Also, like how you make a interesting story too! Next time, try and use Wow words.
Mynie good work!
I was about to see a tsunami ! FIRST, of all i was driving to the beautiful beach meanwhile i began to play half-an-hour .later,i saw a tall tsunami the siren began a loud sound but however i was still playing on the crunchy sand.4 minutes.After-ward a large tsunami ,began but i was still there.
Then, the huge tsunami flew me alive. However, i landed on an mystery island. Soon, i walk toward the foot-step of the island i saw a door.Finally, i knocked the door and the door open and there it was.I carefully walk in i saw a Figure shape like Ultron i waked him up the evil began.??.
By Pak g.4
Once there was a girl who didn’t know where she is.Her name is Lily .One day,she was playing with her cat at the park and her cat’s tail went on a delight door. The door open and there it was … a colorful flower .She touch it an fell down a lovely hole . She saw spikes at the bottom of the hole then that was the end of her live.
I was looking for a job I saw some paper on the floor I pick it up and it said “We want one night guard and you can get 1,000 baht”. I will go to Freddyfazbare pizza I said I want to be night guard. When night time I need to stay in my office. I saw a camera I look in I see 4 robots they called Freddy, Foxy, Chica and Bonnie. When I see my camera again Chica was gone when I open the door Chica was there! I closs the door as fast as I can. I see in my camera again Foxy was gone! I think this night I will die! Because it just 5 AM. When I see the clock again It 6AM so I can get 1000 baht.
Nice job teachn that are one funning story I ever read
thank Rook
Rook why you forgot I in my name and why funny be funning
Your story is so exited. And it so fancy too. But when me and my mom read your story we can’t understand some of your story. Next times keep it up!
There was one Nightguard he was finding a house and he found one house! It was so dark and he said “Let’s go in” and he was going in and he ask “Is somebody there?” And no one answer him and he was going in and the door opened and there was a Freddy
Jacky665
Yesterday I saw a new game it was called GTA I came back to my home I rush my self to Fashion shopping mall to buy a phone to play GTA game. I was very excited to see my new I-phone and that day I forgot what is the game’s name. Fen, a character in the game, went to one play ground I saw a portal I went in and it said……Welcome…… to GTA world and when I said “where am I” and one box fall on my head I read it. It said “if you finish the GTA mission you will go back where you come from” and he finish the mission the door opened and there it was my HOME.
Andy 3/1
Andy this story was very funny.
I like your story it is very cool.
Keep it up Andy!
In lovely Paris,I live with my my rabbit named fluffy. A few years later i lost him in a old garage when I was finding some tools. As fast as a mouse it was November again. i decided to sneak inside the old garage. To find my long lost rabbit. I crept into the garage. The door opened and there was a white creature that crawled out… It was fluffy my long lost rabbit.She looked a bit different but I am sure its her.
gigi 3/1
By:Gigi 3/1
gigi 3/1
It’s me Woonsen and today haven’t seen my dog yet. I try to find it every single Rome in my house. Until I saw my sister and I ask her where is the dog, she said it was disappear and I was so shocked to hear that word from her mouth. When I tell my mom that my sister say like that and she didn’t care. That time I was angry I want to tell my dad to but I think he gonna say like everyone in my family. Five minutes later, I walk to my room, the door opened and there was my little dog hiding me under my bed and I say that iI hate my dog
Sorry for say it wrong at sat sentence iI to I.
Thank you for reading my story.
Hello my name is Samantha and I’m a witch.today they have a store near my house .Inreal my mom Crista will go there with me but I feel kind of sick so I can’t go there with her .Crista ask me what I wanted I tell her that I wanted a cat my mom said alright then she left I stay alone for 5 hours now .I herd a bell ring (ting tong ) I open the door and I was joyful it was my mother and a little black cat I said thanks to my mother .then I name my cat Black .wherever I go I take Blacks with me he was an cute little friend I love him .Witches always had a little black cat! By :Milan grade 4
Based on a true story..(it will be in anonymous point of view)
Creak…Creak. The wooden door creaked loudly and woke me from my peaceful slumber. I held my breath as the door opened and there, stood my grandmother. I sighed in relief and relaxed back into my bed. After a while, I heard the same creak…creak. This time I was more relaxed but still wary. My grandmother made her grand entrance and she went back into bed. Suddenly, she said, “… Where is your younger sister?”. I furrowed my eyebrows in confusion, of course my sister was in bed by now. Before I could utter a word, my grandmother was already speaking, “… call your mom”. I mentally raised my eyebrows and stayed silent. After waiting for some time, I fell asleep. Unfortunately, the creaking continued all night long. The next day, I felt horribly sleepy and uncomfortable.
…The door opened and there it was…
In my life it was very disastrous, because I had wished that I was a dog owner, and had my own dog to look after. Then suddenly… the door opened and there it was! A dog ,it was roughing happily and jump
at me and snoozing in the carpet and then we play for hours and hours until it dinner time and my cutest dog ever. The next morning …the door open and there it was!!! A puppy now I think I getting better than before then million of puppies came to my living room ,ho is fantastic for me now but I needed to feed them or they will be hungry so I feed them and before I went to bed I play with a puppy. But now I am not grumpy any more. Tawan G3
In the dark Box the cat come out every night to find its prey. As the trees are blown by the wind the cat slowly walk into the house with a fake mouse on its back. When I went down stairs to drink water The door opened and there it was the evil cat. also its prey is not human. the cat walk inside the house so I carry it out side. As the cat walk slowly to the hidden trees I went to sleep and the cat slowly come in the door again. I don’t know how or what it use to open the door but it did. The cat quietly walk to its target, a fake mouse. it bite the mouse and I heard a sound so I went down and put the cat that I don’t own out side again. Now in the dark the cat went to sleep next to the door because I locked the door.
Mark G6/2
The door opened and there it was a big box and I slowly opened it. It was a dead body! The dead body said ” Can I have some pizza?” The dead body ate it and it fell asleep, that is my great surprise!
Nina G1/1
The door is opened and there it was, a cute puppy I run away and called my mom.
My mom just sad it not scared. When my sister came and my sister sad you buy a dog
agin. Every day my sister play with it. My dad come and dad sad you cannot take care.
Lilly G1/1
She was sleeping while her brother hid her doll. She woke up and went to find her doll.The door opened and there it was her small doll.She was happy when she saw her favorite doll.
She showed it to her naughty brother. She hugged her doll and went back to sleep with her doll.
Cheque G1/1
Cheque, I love your story. But can you tell me who the naughty brother is?
To begin with our family camping. We were walking in a creepy forest. We were lost for more than 2 hours. We decided to go east and we found a scary hut. It was a hut with a single door. Then the door opened and there it was “a zombie “! Run!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I shouted. We ran away from the zombie as fast as a cheetah. Run west! Run south! Back to our camp , we packed and drove the car home.
Shin G2/2
One lucky day, I went to a giant zoo with my family and, senddenly an enormouse panda had climb out of a cage! The police said that everyone need to help find the panda.So me and my family find it toowe went everywhere for example On the tree , under the bench, and in other panda cage alsothe the zoo keeper house. Finally, I just think of a fantastic place where no one had gone. It where the zoo keeper keep food and the door opened and there it was the panda! We tould the people to come get the panda and we got free 90,000,000 balt because we find the panda. I say in my mind yay nI am rich now I can buy a new house.
I was in my plain old house.My parents called it “Rusty” for some reason.I read a book it was about Boggarts.”Boggarts will turn itself to anything that scares you the most.”Boggarts are very rare.I read softy.When I walked down the stairs.My house changed into a big,dark and lonely aquarium.I searched and searched for the exit until a curious black door came upon me.The door opened and there it was the horrifying Boggart.I thought they never existed but I was wrong.I finally spotted the exit so I ran for it,the Boggart turned into a giant spider(because that’s what I am afraid of)I was close to the exit.I could feel my moment of glory waiting for me.Unfortunately,I had to jump so I did it and I was back at home.Will anyone believe my story I thought.
New G.4
The three children, Brendan, Cordelia, and Eleanor, climbed down the thick rusted bolts that held the Moray’s sides together.”Whoa.” Brendan said in amazement. As the door opened there it was, a small cabin and the floors, walls, and ceiling were covered in human bones. When the Walkers shifted their feet, the floor moved, clicked and snapped. “What is this place?” Cordelia asked. “And how are those sticking to the wall?”, “Magic.” said a stunned Eleanor. Brendan had found a cutlass sticking through the cabin wall. He had accidentally pulled the cutlass out and the bones started flying and forming a long, dinning table. The three children were all starving, but, out of thin air, three sizzling porterhouse steaks appeared on the bone plates, along with hand-cut French fries and creamed spinach. -Roxy G 6/2
I wish I could write more ;v;
There is a boy named Tod. He lives in the floating city. In the city, He founds a big magic door. He opened it and entered inside. He saw many amazing things such as small elephants, gigantic lizards, human tree and a wizard. The wizard gives him a wand and teaches him some spells. Suddenly Tod wakes up and find that a wand is in his hand. Tod says that the fun is going to begin.
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As the sizzling fire ball hit the bookcase, I dodged the books luckily I wasn’t hurt. So I carefully stood up and to my surprise he was gone. Suddenly John burst through the doors and knocked all the bookshelves down.” John, next time, don’t barge in like that. ” I told him. ” You don’t know how many soldiers I had to fight back there! ” John said exhaustingly. “Never mind, we have to reach the top.” I told him.”Lets go.” As we were climbing the stairs, out of nowhere soldiers surrounded us. “I think its time use that move that Sensei taught you.” John said.”Okay” I said. Carefully I moved my arms and legs in a position and said some magic words and suddenly some blue sparks came out of my hands and the soldiers disapeared into ashes. Later on we reached a door and the door opened and there It was
Nice Gerard
By: Gerard Gr.5
It was one family, the all live in a normal way and normal life. But suddenly there is someone knock the door and a little ran throughout the door the door open and it was her uncle. He adventure a lot of place to see the truth today he came to this family because he is tired to adventure and he is sick, he said to his brother that he want to stay with his daughter. So he stay in this family and live with them. One years later after the all live happily, a little girl saw something under her uncle pillow it said “All the truth about world” she read it and she think that he is not her uncle but he is a stranger she thought. She also look at the desk to see something else but no, she took a picture and place it where she found. she look again the picture and there is some word that is like a language in some country. She search in website to translate it but there is no language. One day there is a mail came to this family she read it and then her father got sick than her mother also sick but her uncle still the same. Today her uncle life the house and go outside when her uncle came back her mother and father get more sick. Then a little tell uncle to leave the house than her mother and father get more good with their life