Hi Everyone
This weeks challenge is..
…but later that day…
Questions to ask:
- What was happening beforehand?
- Was the thing that happened good or bad?
- Who was involved?
- What happened next?
Remember your entries should be about 100 words only (about 7-10 lines). It is your very best writing we are looking for! Good Luck!
==> This writing will be entered into a worldwide writing competition each week.
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It all began when I went to Stamford Bridge to watch Chelsea Football Club. Today they were playing against the team I hate the most – ARSENAL! I was so excited – I woke up at 6 o’clock and munched my breakfast as fast as a gorilla! I ran into my dad’s room and dragged him out of bed! ‘Come on!’ I yelled at him. We went to watch the match and won 1-0! As we were leaving the ground, John Terry drove past and invited my dad and I out to dinner! We went and ate fish and chips by the river – it was fantastic.…but later that day…I was feeling a bit sick – it must have been the fish! Oh dear!
On Sunday I woke up at 9:00am I it was really cold I open the door I went outside it was even colder than inside!I knocked on my cousin door she open the door so I went into her room and we play we talk about how cold it is today then I ask what is the temperature it was 16 celsius after a while we went to eat breakfast downstairs it was about 11:30 we play for so long at that time the temperature was 13 celsius it was getting colder and colder!!!I went to play outside I just wear my pyjamas because it warm, I sit on a golf car it was fun we drive outside the house too, we saw a dog it chase us I was so scared but it was pretty awesome.But later that day i have to go home so I was sad.
T.Mac how do i post a paragraph for this week’s challenge
Aighla, you can just post a paragraph like you posted this question! Hit reply to Mr. Mac and then write your story!
May I ask why some of the entries are in red?
Hi Star, the ones that are red are links. If you click on them you will see I have made them individual posts and children from around the world are giving you feedback!
Votre confiance dans la technistructure et la technocratie est à l’aune de votre défiance envers les politiques. Vous devriez suggérer qu’on supprime les élections et qu’on fasse simplement administrer le pays par des chefs d&r;auosentreprise!Pqs de mort lié à Fukushima dites-vous : quel délai fixez-vous exactement pour qu’un décès cesse d’être lié à cette semi-catastrophe, selon votre expression plaisante ?
Go to the zoo
I was going to the zoo! The time we get in the car was 9:00 o’clock. The time we arrive it was 9:30. The fist station is feed the bird it was so cute. the next station is seeing the monkey it was so funny so we laugh. Then we go to feed the giraff it has very long neck! Then we take a lunch. After we finish the lunch we keep going we went to see the hippopotamus and I was scare then iI began to come down. The next station we went to see the crocrodile I was became more scary because the body is bigger and it has sharp teeth but it steel sleeping that was the end of the day. I was so happy but later that day I was so tired!
Never in my life had I been so exhausted. One foot lagged behind the other as I painfully took each step. “Why on earth did I want to do this in the first place?” I wondered. Other runners whizzed by effortlessly as I trudged along the road. Twenty-one kilometers was twice as far as the longest distance I had ever run before. I despised nearly every minute of the race… but later that day… when my bruised toenails peeled off of my tender skin, I felt nothing but pride for my gruesome little trophies.
Once upon a time there lived a little girl named Sindey. She lived with her grandmother and her sister. Her sister name is Katy. They live in a small house. They lived happily but later that day a shadow of someone crawling at the front of Sindey’s bed. Sindey quickly ran to her grandmother’s room and she told her that she saw someone crawling at the front of her bed. Her grandmother walked to her room and her grandmother looked around her room and saw someone on Sidney’s bed. Sidney’s grandmother quickly call the police finally the man got in jail.
Well done Jessie! T.John
My Trip To Japan
On December 24 2015 I woke up on 6:00 am because I was going to Japan!!! I was so excited then I get on my car and went to the airport.
After that,I got on the plane and sat for a long 7 hours.Later, we got to Japan and went to a busy,big,and warm hotel the temperature was -3c I slept. The next day was Christmas!!!!! But later that day I saw a man with big horns,fur,and a sythe it was Krampus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I dash away as fast as I can but Krampus try to use his evil toys to catch me but at last I out run him and lost him the end. By Gus
Dr. B, you continue to rock my world everyday! I love that you write EXACTLY how you talk, th1;a#82&7ts important to me… and you’ve got it girl!Keep on conquering the world.Martha
My Trip To Japan
On December 24 2015 I woke up on 6:00am because I was going to Japan!!! I was so excited.Then I get on my car and went to the airport.After that I got on the plane and sat a long 7 hours. Later we got to Japan and went to a busy,big,and warm hotel the temperature was -3c I slept. The next day was Christmas!!!!! But later that day I saw a man with big horns,fur,and a sythe it was Krampus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I dash away as fast as I can but Krampus try to use his evil toys to catch me but at last I out run him and lost him the end. By Gus
My Trip To Japan
On December 24 2015 I woke on 6:00am because I was going to Japan!!! I was so excited then I get on my car and went to the airport. After that I went on the plane and sat for a long 7 hours. Later we got to Japan and went to a busy,big,and warm hotel the temperature is -3c I slept. The next day was Christmas!!!!! But later that day I saw a man with big horns,fur,and a sythe it Krampus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I dash away as fast as I can but Krampus try to use his evil toys to catch me but at last I out run him and lost him the end. By Gus
Oh dear! Particularly enjoyed that final comment.
i support them so YOUR ON what good story
woops wrong thing
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Family movie night? That doesn’t sound as bad, we ARE family after all.. Though stubborn much, Alfie, Matt, and Francey won’t accept it. Matt and Allen accept each other as brothers, but not me as their mother. “What a sad story…” Flavio would say.”What a broken family..” Adren*, or in reality, the devil would sigh.But later that day, something outagrous happened. Alfie and Matt wanted a family movie night!! With my cupcakes!!! I’ve never been so happy in my life! Not that I was never happy, I wad always cheerful!! Time to collect some limbs from my corpse pile to mix them with my delicious cupcakes!!~*~”Should we tell him?” Allen asked his so called “brother”.”Nope. Let’s just steal them before he feeds them to us and put it in our alternates’ food.” Matt answered with a cocky grin..
A/N: ahahaha plot twist!! Yay I’m the first!
Oh and,
*= Im not sure what his human name is whoops
Limbs and cupcakes….hmmm…. how delightful!
Last year i went to England with Moly and M.rDan it was so fun when i came in to England i was waiting for teacher Dan to get me to his farm or his house and i like time that i went to chicken farm and that my first day that i get a eggs from male chicken and i went to my room and i told my dad that when i came to London i could not take i pad in next day i went to big river floating by the waterfall and there is a long way and in the next day i went to Stone Henge that so amazing and cool and i do not know that why they think the alien stop there,and in third day i went to HARRY POTTER and the last is London bridge is so FUN.but later that day i was happy a little cause i was miss my home and that is my last day is so FUN and that is my favourite holiday YAH.
That time I went to HongKong with me,Taechin,Man-u,Andy,Jubu,Na,Cachain and Pooping brother to Disney land and I sleep in Disney land Hotel too and I can ride the train to temple and I went to Ocean park its can draw a pictures,look the eagle show and I can ride the cable car so much thing that fun there but later that day I went to Science Light Museum is it very fun and i can buy a toy in Toy R us.
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I was at the park playing and I walk for a long time and I also pack delicious lunch I was having a wonderful time.Then,we went running and we also went to the exercising place.First,I try the monkey bar and my dad liked it a lot he did something you have never seen before.Then,it was lunchtime.We had a delicious lunch.In the afternoon we walk some more until it was almost night.We went to a restaurant named”Best Grill”and we eat steak,fried fish,meat,and chicken they were my best foods and I like them after that,we went home and it was night I went to bed and sleep.
I was at the hospital and was waiting impatiently for my medicine.I was getting bored so I told my dad that I wanted to wait in the car after that my mom came back with two bags.”Mom, what are in those bags?”I asked wondering what was inside ,”One bag has your medicine in it and I bought you some treats and the other bag has books in it do you like it?”mom said”yes” I nodded.But later that day I was running and fell down and broke my left leg”That’s what you get for running”I thought in my head.
My ImaginationIt start when I’m at the hunted house. I went in that horrid house with Mickey and New, everyone felt terrible. We went up stair and we saw a ghost and we ran down the stair with a terrible feeling !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Soon after we saw a skeleton and we ran outside but outside it is full with rip cement. We all stay close to each other until we will pass the rip, but later that day we are still in the rip cement because it is so far to pass out the cemetery. After that times Mickey and me called the police. Then the fearless police came to get us out of the cemetery with a helicopter. We all get safe and the police sent us back to the school (Keerapat International School). Many days after we tell our friends that what happened to us and we tell them as happily as we played together everydays.
I type the word everyday wrong, I put and s at the back that makes me wrong.
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It all start with my cousin dog it has baby! I was so excited because I had to go learn math at gateway with my cousin and the class end at 6:00 so I have to sleep over at my cousin house me and my cousin play together I get to touch the baby dog but I never gonna touch the mom (the baby mom and my cousin dog) it was horrified (scary) for me . I try to go near it and it shouted (Hong Hong ) at me I feel terrible that time it was like I met somethings so scary. I’m not going to lie I cry that time but you know ours live need to met somethings good and bad I think that I’m lucky enough that it didn’t bite me.On Sunday it starts turning cold I’m still at my cousin house tomorrow I would come to school . On Monday ting tong (the clock sound) it time to go home I was happy I really miss my dog my grand mom pick me up “I has a bad news “she said breathing slowly “what wrong “I ask her Nicky die (my dog)I was shocked I ask my grandma again “Is it real or you’re just tricking me” ” it’s real he die because the weather was freezing!”❄️ I can feel that my tear are coming down from my eyes I try to stop it but I can’t I feel sorry that I can’t go see him and hug him before he died I wanna tell him that I’m sorry that I didn’t play with him a lot but it too late I want him to come back . Now I know that no one can replace other dog in my heart he would always be in my heart forever . But later that day I did learn something from him make good memory with someone you love before it to late . The end This is a real story that happened on Sunday-Monday
Milan this is a very nice story…..
did you telling Milan is a nice really but now am argee with you that milan
is a good story so its a like story O.K.
Amazing use of onomatopoeia, Milan! I love it when you use things we have learned about in class!
Once upon a time there was a kid name Mana she was not a normal kid!! she was a adventure kid a kids that likes to fight Mana was a brave kid she fought monsters she got out of of space to fought the giagantic banana monster she also fought with the aliens that have one eye!!!! When she grew up she helped a kid named E.Q and she also helped a 12 year old kid name Sara. Sara almost fell from the cliff because of the terrific ridiculous monster named manw but later that day……Mana helped her she punch the monster kick it and stab the monster and the monster said Oooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!And it run away from Mana………..To be continued……………………….
Wow, what a cliff hanger! That’s a cool way to end a story, Prod.
It all began in Tatoin there was a stromtrooper everywhere shooting at the rebel. The empire bring the stardestroyer to destroy rebel. The rebel destroy all stromtrooper and Dark vader was mad quickly Dark vader destroy tatoin by deathstar .The empire won and everyone was happy normally the rebles destroy the deathstar by captain Hansolo but later that day there are still people that has a hate and he could become a sith!!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone in rebel said “We won”!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very excited,I am coming in the amazing dream that i don’t believe and i never do it in my real life before. I always said to my dad that i don’t want to go to sleep but because today i went to the zoo then i went to the swimming pool and i am very tired so that why i am very quickly to go to the bedroom.Suddenly,i was on the bed and think of the thing that i want it to be in my dream. Suddenly,i open my eye and saw the amazing thing that i never saw it before,and that is the toys! It was all around my body!! we can think of the toys that we want and we can get it! It very amazing!but suddenly…..I woke up!!!,i feel sad a little bit and i think that why i not sleep again?Suddenly,i sleep again! yesssss!!! but now you know the amazing thing is coming again! because now i have a wings!!! and i can fly too!!! I can go to anywhere that l want now!! yessss yes come on! why am i woke up again!! ring!! ring!! ring!! ring!! oh come on just a crazy clock! oh no i cannot sleep anymore.Now,i feel very sad.
dear Many
i am Andy i like your story is was so AMAZING COOL
AND WONDERFUL TO
You are awsome your story is wonderful
I am very sorry if i write some word wrong.
They were one family that hate Christmas. ”One of the kid said i think Christmas is boring, ungreatful and there MOM Shouted ”YEAH”.But later that day they saw under that Christmas
tree there was a prestent that body was expecting FOR IT they read it and it said in a CAPITAL WORD
KRAMPUS . Soon they heard a knock from the chimney ”WHAT’S that” screaming in fear !! THEY went close to the knock the oldest grandpa brought A Shotgun. They discoverd a horn under the chimney. Then the closest person beside the chimney got pulled up .After the oldest man pulled his Shotgun from
his pocket and shot like crazy . Finally a smoke from no where apear when the smoke was gone everybody was gone . i woke up everybody was normal i thought in my head ”i almost die”
oooww.
i mean nobody
i mean nobody in the word there was a prestent that [here this word] (body) was expecting.
That time I went to Japan and I went to Tokyo Disney land is has so many to play and I went to Lego land I have fun in there and I wen to temple but later that day I think I want to go there again.
Once a upon a time Molly was having a cup of tea,but later that day a wicked witch came and grabbed Molly on the hand but the wicked witch had no plan. so Molly ran and ran and she found a way home.
It all began when I went to the beach I waked up very very late so my mom shouted at me to wake up so I went to bath I bath perfectly then,I choose my favorite shirt and short.Next I went in the car,it was not traffic so we went smoothly on the road then we are at the beach we didn’t swim because the wave was to hard and the white sand was cover by the water but later that day we order some delicious food, It’s all seafood.Then the food came to our table I was so exited to eat them,so I ate some crabs,fishes and some wonderful shrimps.
It was good ,but you only included one period or dot.
From PAT in G3
One horrible day, I was just going home and I heard “Boom!” a ship fell down from the sky I investigate it and I found black blooded troops I thought that they died from crashing but I saw a black person in a black mask he said slowly “Come to our dark side and you will concur the galaxy together mhaaaa!” I quickly ran into the toilet because I need to pee because I was so scared! I was safe here but not outside though. I look outside it was safe so I called remfocrement they are good people they have light saber only one of them Luke skywalker we had war with the black mystery person we won but the black person lives.
To begin with, It was very fun and now I going to talk about it! Firstly, I jump out of the bed as fast as a cheetah. This is because I got ticket for watching the wonderful match of Asenal vs Braseloa. Afterwards, I wait patiently for the massive bus. Then we were there, Messi over head kick skilfully in the goal. In the end of the match the whistle had blow Messi scores 4 and Naymar scores 3 Braselona won perfectly for 7-0. But later that day I got a headache because of watching the match for 1 hour and 30 minuets.THE END
Today was the most exciting day ever!!! I actually got my own phone for the first time!! You dont know how depressing it can be when all the other kids are bragging about their new i- phone,and your the only one that doesnt have any!! So any way,while my mom was holding the i-phone and talking about some responsibilities about the phone.I was looking at my phone,”man,i really want that i-phone sooooo bad.”i said . Finally,mom handed me the phone .”Just be careful about being-” mom said.before she could say another word,i rushed up to my room to check it out.”addicted…”mom said”..kids..”.For once in my life,i felt like my whole world started to light up a bit.But later that day,when i was walking to school ,I was really excited to spread the news that I,Katie Anderson,owned a phone.When i arrived there were many cheerful faces around.”maybe they know about my new phone.”i said .I met my friend near the playground and said “hi,why are you smiling?” “well…”my friend says “i got my new blackberry phone!!!its the new hit!!” “oh,umm…okay…” i said with a fake smile across my face “those i-phones were so yesterday!! Am i right Katie?” “uh..yeah…”i said with a broken heart… 🙁
I will tell you how I got forty-four hamsters. It all began when I asked my mother for a hamster and she took me to a pet store that only sold hamsters in JJ market.I bought a male and a female.Both were winter whites and one of them was rare.My sister bought a female syrian hamster but my mother bought a male syrian hamster.We went home with the hamsters and their new cages.I named my hamsters Snowy and Speedy.My sister named hers Daisy but she changed it to Eyba.My mother named hers Daycha.The hamsters were delighted to get a new cage.Then later that day,Speedy was missing so we searched all around carefully.My mother said that Speedy will come back on Sunday and he came back.He also brought another hamster and I named him Stripy.I have got more hamster history to tell but today this is all I can tell.
Great work Hamster Girl! Teacher John.
One day, My dad told me that we are having an awesome barbecue party tomorrow, and I can invite my friends so ,first invited my super best friend Gus.Then, I invited Pak, his a nice friend to me too. I don’t think we need a Dj because I’m going to be a Dj it is a great job,but later that day me and my dad rerized that we didn’t have food for the barbecue party so me and my dad went to Promanade to buy delicious food in the gourmet market it was good because I get to spend time with my dad.The next day the party was very amazing every people that invited came.This is a good thing that they came,this is the best thing I did in my life.
In a island far far away there was a ship named the desttiny bounty it was a big dragon ship and it had seven canons and it saild the most deadlest part of the sea. There was green fog the people saw another ship with 8 snake heads. Finlly a person yelled snake praites serpents started aprering .The serpents pushed a big while sundlley a big serpent came out of the water but later that day they lost.
what a short story and you wrote sundlley instead of suddenly!
It all began when I went to my friends house. When I arrived at my friends house as fast a cheetah and pull me up stairs and some games like ,but my friend was brushing her teeth perfectly. Also her little sister and my little wanted to play. My friend choose to play mum and dad and I was so exited to play with my friends because me and my friend could see at only on Sunday. When we finished playing. Her mum called for her for lunch we ate Korean food from Korean restaurant. Then we played the Korean game and we were eating fruit. But she said we have to sleep ,but she said ,”You could play quietly”. Finally I played with my friend and my sister with her friend and we slept.
One day,I was walking down the street and saw a huge gigantic monster! It was so big that I cannot even see its face. Then I ignored it. I had a picnic with my friends under the shade. We were having the best time. But later that day, the monster was right in the middle of us! It started picking us up and looking at us. It didn’t notice that our moms were coming to help us. But it was too high that our moms cannot reach. They went home and fetch the longest ladders they have and put them together. They held the ladders together because it was too big for one mom to hold it and put it against the nearest tree to the back of the monster. We tricked the monster and asked “Can we ride your back?” The monster said “Of course, you can.” We jumped down to the ladder and quietly sneaked in our cars so the monster doesn’t hear us.
what a short story and you wrote sundlley instead of suddenly!
so so so fun, I love it so much it was the best story in grade 2/2
Ones upon a time there was a girl named Carol, she loves playing with puppies ,Carol goes to her uncles house every Sunday , there are puppies there for her to play with . One afternoon she was feeling really terrible ,she fell from her bike , she failed her Math exam , her best friend is going away for 5 months. But later that day her uncle gave her a pug puppy ,her uncle always knew how much Carol loved puppies ,then she after a few months she as happy as her little giggly puppy, the end!!!!!!!!
Aighla G4
Once upon a time there was a one little boy that work in farm but later on that day the village got attacked by a huge Dragon it destroy everything and the next day and the king tell the guard to get all the kids and train them to be a knight to defeat the Dragon and defend the village the king tell all the knight that has been train to go to the Dragon cave to kill the Dragon the Dragon has been defeat every body survive and the village is safe for ever
To begin with I was getting ready for school [like ever day ] but later that day I have so much word to read but my friend get to play. My best friend do not care me in Math class I was get really for bad like but I was not relley for the bad like so I do it so like but my teacher Ben give me a 32%, and I also failed but later the food was good every day, but now is so worry but that I up and I say to by self “It was just a dream ah ah ah!”
Burnside doesn’t seem to be acting consistently with what the actual board wants, and will be gone in 30 days, I’m guessing. That’s when the next board membership changes, and the last vestigial tail of the corrupt Fletcher adniiistratmon dies from becoming a minority of the board.
It all began when the two witch bump together,not so long about four days they meet together all four days.but what they don`t know is long time ago there family has been fight.after they know that they both said “see you again “.
One day, there was a little girl named Roosela she was a kind little girl.She walk in to a dark scary forest there lot of things in there.She saw a house.She bravely opened the small door.She saw lots of food at the table, rudely she ate all the food and ran away, but later that day she needed to go to the doctor because she felt so sick and she went to the hospital and told all the things that she could tell from yesterday. The doctor sat handsomely an checked her.The doctor said she will change to be a vampire in two days.The doctor could not help. She cried and cried, she feel so sad. She went back to the house and shouted “Vampire come here I need you guys!”.So they came to her. She fell in love with the vampire also the vampire fell in love with Roosela. Roosela and the Vampire stay together and live happily ever after.
It very good .story
Once upon a time there was a young boy who called Bobbis but the problem is his family was athief and every day they go out to steal things like gold from the rich man called Freddy . Bobbis father heard a news that Freddy is a rich man so they going to make a plan, they plan to blow Freddy the rich man by the basement!!! They said shouting and yelling except Bobbis . So they go to the old basement then they saw Freddy’s gold lying all over the floor and tiptoed to steal the the gold they then they ran away.
It all began when I was at school. My friend was speaking to me she said that today teacher Jane is not here.The substitute is horrible.she has fangs as sharp as a needle,she can run as fast as a cheetah!I was terrified!What shall I do I can’t be stuck in here with a teacher like this.What if she is a vampire or a witch.Oh god!Oh god!What shall I do …but later that day…the door opened more and more!Out popped a women wearing black smooth dress with red lipstick high heels that were red.(this could be blood.)Long silk brown hair!I couldn’t have looked!When she reached the middle of the classroom interducing her self quickly.And start her teaching nicely.I kind of like her now.
You write so much that I could not know how much work you gig.
Once upon a time, there was a young girl name blondie she live with her father and her two sisters.The two sisters names were kelly and kate,they were very nasty two blondie,they made her clean all the stuff they have made,but only when there father was gone to work.But later that day there was a thief sneaking into there small house,nobody have known that there was a thief in there house!!! after a while the two sisters where fighting together,and blondie was cooking,suddenly there was a little sound at the stair,it was a creeping sound the two sisters shiver”what was that sound said kate,I don’t know said kelly shivering””I will go and see said blondie”she take a knife and slowly walk down,she saw the thief!!! she quickly ran and tell her sisters to get a pan and one more knife !!! but the sisters don’t listen they were still shivering more and more.finally the thief saw the children he quickly take his knife and look at us in a scary smiley face,I heard someone walking up the stair. When the person show up his face it was father!!! the thief turn back to see whats happening when he saw there father he quickly take his knife out and kill there father me and my sisters shout as loud as we could!!! but it was to late there father was killed.When the thief hear the police called out he quickly ran out but the police stop him and ask him question and the thief answered all the the questions the policemen exactly know that the young man was a thief!!! he quickly catch the thief he ask which house where he stealing so the thief tell what house he was stealing so the police ran and help them, the police tell the young children”its okay”so the calm down the police call the hospital and take there father to the hospital.
The day has come , today is the day I said to my Dad that I would go fishing with him . He has asked me many times to go with him , I always say no . After 1 hour in the hot car we day come to the fishing park , there where many ants and bugs , there were not good . But later that day , my fishing line went tight and my rod bent round . Wow! it took me 10 minutes till I got my first fish in to the net , my Dad said it was a “cahoar” about 10 kg . I loved my fishing day with my dad
I love your story about fishing with your dad, Holli! It makes me miss my dad and the things we do together in Colorado!
Good job
One day have a baby girl name is Elsa but my friend call she is monster because she have magic can make snow and ice.they very scare her. Also. Her sister. But later that day have the boy name is Hern he said he like Elsa. He is the queen this every one know him and he said to Elsa this you want to Marry with me . Elsa said yes but you have to love Anna to harn said ok.
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Before i went to Australia to visit my sister because she went to Australia for a month already.me and my mom pack up.the thing that i will bring is my phone ,earphone ,shirt and pants doll and a gift for my sister and when an done packing up me my mom and my dad went to eat steak but later that day we were at airport and my cosin is going with me so when we on the gate that we have to stay .Then i stay on the plane for 8 hours.
To all begun at the bottom of the highest mountain in the world the mountain Everest I store on everything that I needed to climb mount Everest I start to climb my way up but it all ready night I set up tent later on that day I start to climb mount Everest from the bottom of the mountain to the top of the mountain it was so cold and so snowy and I finally got to the Hilary step l set up my tent up there and the next day I start to climb to the top after 10 hours I finally made it to the top of the mountain Everest.
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It all began at the church. When I arrived there were few people in the church and in the church there was my friend. We played until everybody came. We played alligator/crocodile. It was so fun that I had to fall down. When every body came we went our grade. When finished every thing we went out to played funny story. We were drinking juice on the bench. I every time fall down when my friend was saying funny story and I spit out my juice. When it was 3 o’clock we went home but later that day we went home at 4:30. My friends mother said that we could go to there on next Sunday it was the luckiest day ever because there are no Korean people that is same as my age in keerapat international school.
It was another boring day on holiday. I was with my Dad at Dolphin Bay, but later that day everything was going to change. My Dad was getting ready to go fishing with some other men. I wanted to go but my Dad said it was too dangerous and that I did not have a proper, strong rod. My Dad went to the boat and we found there was space for me to come on the boat.It was getting dark and the moon was a bloody red colour. I was nervous but decided to go with then. We went out to sea until we could no long see the land. It was cold, dark and the boat was rocking. We sat fishing for hours. Everyone caught lots of fish, except me. I was cold and a little scare. We had to pee in the sea. It got late, and then it happened. My rod went down fast and hard. It nearly went into the sea. I managed to reel it in and I had the biggest fish of the day. I drove the boat back and we ate the yummy fish.
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We was searching for treasure. We was heading for the Galapagos island. Finally, we reached the island and started digging. We dug for days and we found treasure. We put the treasure on the ship. We opened the treasure chest and found gold coins. I checked if it was gold coins but later that day I found that it was not gold coins. It was chocolate coins and we ate the chocolate.
I love chocolate! Well done Shin! Teacher John
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I slammed the door shut behind me, enraged. I muttered swear words under my breath, as the adrenaline flushed through my face… I didn’t do it… I didn’t even touch her. Then my mind cleared up and a vivd memory arose from the oblivion in my mind. “I did do it… I remember… I remember how i teased her about her looks, her hobbies, the ways she dresses… All the pressure i placed on her.” I could see her at the corner of the mirror, how she hanged there dead. I gazed into the mirror, looking through the void of my eyes, feeling completly ashamed of my doing, yet feeling no remorse… However as i stared for longer, sudden ecstasy rushed through my body. That day my lawyer cleared up my case and bailed me out from the case, but later that day… voices started to echo and ring in my head… “Murderer, killer…murderer, killer” then those voices cresendoed… Every word sounded like a bell ringing in my ears… “Make it stop!… make it stop…” My painful outcries were diminished by the sound of the voices… “Yes… Only one way to end this… I will have to… Have to… Die…”… Later that day a police found a 17 year old boy hanging in the same house where there was another suicide recently… There, in the corner of the mirror… The dead body turns around and you can see it slowly smile… in satisfaction.
-Richard (G.6/2)
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It was a wonderful day in the forest. Birds were singing, trees were dancing everyone and everything was happy. Suddenly, a thundering gun shot was heard. I started to panic, the animals panicked, the peace was gone. All was chaos. Ducks, birds, deer, rabbits, even fishes!! They were pouncing going crazy!!! The gun shot was so ear-splitting, it happened just in a split second. With just that one gun shot, it caused a huge impact on the forest. But later that day, all chaos was gone, nothing can be heard. It was so muted it seemed like it was actually louder than the roaring gun shot. Peace was renewed, it was a happy day in the forest. BANG! It was happened again.
It was a very gloomy day to go to visit haunted hospital with a brave mood and with my fabulous family! Not for long we’re going, but my dad told me that “care yourself is well”! Suddenly, we’re almost there, so the dangerous thunder was started to bang louder and louder, “BANG”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was the loudest one because we were arrive their, and 20 more minutes till midnight.”Oh no” my mom shouted! If it’s midnight the zombie from the hospital will resope, so we need to go inside that spooky hospital to see how is it scary first and then we will go home! Now we’re exploring for 15 minutes inside that hospital and my grandpa were looking at his expensive phone and it was 5 minutes left to get out of this haunted hospital, because the zombie will respone!!!!!!!!!! In a while it’s too late to run out because the zombie was already respone and all of it was so greedy till it run to eat us!!!!!!!!!!Luckly, It’s yust a dream and this dream will not come true, so I don’t need to be worried about it any more.
One evening, Sarah was having the most fantastic time daydreaming in her own little world. She listened to birds chirping and the squirrels squeaking and suddenly, there was a thundering growl. Realizing this, her eyes opened and she sprang upwards, immediately slapping herself in the face with a tree, surprised she threw herself backwards and fell on her bottom into a puddle. Blushing furiously, she glanced around her to see if anyone was watching. It was as if the world was mocking her when rain came pouring down on her. She stomped home angrily, but not before falling face first into the mud. Later that day, after she had got herself cleaned and ready for bed, Sarah looked out the window and heard a deafening roar causing her to trip over a chair.
All I had ever wanted since I was a wee toddler was to have a never-ending supply of my favourite biscuits; things just don’t happen that way here, I’m afraid. “Why?” I asked myself, looking at the rapidly decreasing stack of cookies. Sitting there, it was becoming more and more a battle of the minds. It was me versus cookie. Cookie was tempting me and begging for his life at the same time! Hours passed in this state of limbo, but later that day this inner-debate was smashed into oblivion. Mum was home, and cookies followed with her.
Well done Ben, that takes the biscuit! Teacher John G1/1
In a library a kid named Jo got a book called ghost killer and brought it home he read it under his blanket.As he read the book shook and went out the window like magic Jo looked out the window he saw a ghost musketeer riding a ghost horse ran to another house killing people but later that day in the morning he was gone he read the book and nothing happened .
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One day in my life. I was playing my iPad in my own room. Then I heard my mom was singing in the kitchen and making food for dinner. Then I went down to tell her to stop singing, but she didn’t stop. When my dad come back from doing work, he was singing too and I was so angry. When I saw my sister going down from upstairs, she was singing too then I said to her that is this singing day. But later that day they tell me that it was just a prank to make me angry.
It’s begin at Singapore.I had been there to study for a 3 months.Seems like it is very Long time for me but, not for the other.I stayed alone in the condo.The place where I live near is called Sengkang.My Mom visited me 1 months for 1 week.I go to school by MRT train.My mom said Singapore is not dangerous like Thailand.I felt like being alone in the city.I was sad.Sometimes I go vacation with friends there.I miss my mom so much and I felt sad all the time.So my mom decided to let me come back to Thailand.So finally I’m here at my country!!!!
I’m very happy on that day because that day is the day that my family travel to Hong-Kong together we eating and shopping but now I can’t go with my family anymore because everyone is sick and I have to travel with my Mom dad and my sister, Now I’m very sad but I have to happy because my mom my dad is go with me but later that day I’m very happy.
One fine day, I went to the hauted house school it was just a game. I wish I would be fine because it is really scary in the news said. Later in midnight it was time to go to the school.I was so exited .My family drive the car.”It is there!” I said we went to the car parking there was no one in the hauted school at all. I am starting to be scare now.We went in there it is so dark even I can’t see my feet.We went into a room that said caution don,t enter.BUT LATER THAT DAY when I open the door we saw a real ghost student!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t belive my eye!!!!!!! I saw a ghost as tall as a building!!!Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! We quilkly ran to the car and drive home.
They were one family that hate Christmas. ”One of the kid said i think Christmas is boring, ungreatful and there MOM Shouted ”YEAH”.But later that day they saw under that Christmas
tree there was a prestent that nobody was expecting FOR IT they read it and it said in a CAPITAL WORD
KRAMPUS . Soon they heard a knock from the chimney ”WHAT’S that” screaming in fear !! THEY went close to the knock the oldest grandpa brought A Shotgun. They discoverd a horn under the chimney. Then the closest person beside the chimney got pulled up .After the oldest man pulled his Shotgun from
his pocket and shot like crazy . Finally a smoke from no where apear when the smoke was gone everybody was gone . i woke up everybody was normal i thought in my head ”i almost die”
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It all started in Japan when I was Skiing with my best friends Win,Zurich,and Gus we were the best Skiers in Japan , I thought “Why don’t we go and beat all of the Skiers”. later that day , we sign up for the race , also we trained for the race suddenly we broke our left leg “OOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” I called the Ambulance to bring us to the Hospital , in 2 Days it would be the race”HOW ARE WE GOING TO WIN THE RACE!” Zurich said , I said ” It’s okay the doctor says in 1 month we can play ski I’ll send my sister to do it.” I called my sister and she says “ok!” My sister won the 1st place! I cant beleive it!!!! 1 month later we went back together to ski again.
I am so sad for sweet little Plata…but I am thankful that she was with someone who loved her at the end. I am glad she didn’t die alone and unnoticed. I don’t believe in an ft0;a22erlife” or a “rainbow bridge”… but nothingness is better than suffering. You won’t be forgotten sweet Plata… many tears being shed for you .
It all began when the world had a news that soon the world would be flooded and we have to move to some where very high like Mount Everest. So, we were planning to. I was so excited to go to Mount Everest. When the news said that we would have the flood next week, I got even more excited. We finally got there and it was fun. It was very fun! But I started to see the flood. It separated me and my family. Then everyone in my family shouted, “Avalanche!” on your side. The avalanche blew me away even further. Then I fell asleep. When I woke up, I got frost bites on my toes. I was lucky I had a walkie talkie. My family said to try to get my climbing stick and climb up and I tried and I saw a similar path so I followed it. Later that day I found my family and we were happy and we were back together forever after.
Last year i visited my grandpa at Nakonsritummarat,he sick. I met my relatives.We wanted to go to the waterfall and the beach.We went to the waterfall first and after we want to the beach.We arrived the beach in morning.I saw many people slid down from the waterfall.I thought it very fun.I slid down same many people.My mom told me it very dangerous.Suddenly someone crashed me and i had wound at my chin becaues my chin hit the rock.My mom took me to the hospital.The doctor suture wound at my chin.Later that day never slide down from waterfall
On my birth day of 2007, I got a cat for an present. it stayed for more than 7 years. on night I went to get an fish for it, the cat does not look very happy so try to make it happy. but later that day the cat is gone. instead I found another cat that I don’t own. my dad told me it’s from another place. but in then finally know that my cat is dead because of the stranger cat. I try my best to not let the stranger cat touch the sister cat or else it will get killed too. then I notice that the stranger cat is mostly stayed in the bush were snakes mostly are so I don’t mind about it. but in the end,all the cats I have died.
One day, I was strolling down my neighbor hood park. No, this wasn’t anything unusual, it was part of my daily routine. I sat down on a bench and pulled out a thick book, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, and countinued reading from where I left off. But, as I was reading, I started to feel dizzy, like when you would get car sick. I closed my book and tried to walk back home, when I got home, I collapsed on my bed. But, later that day, I realized I had fallen asleep. But, I never found out why I had gotten so dizzy eariler.
Ohm Grade 1/1
The blonde woman who’s carrying her baby is feeling frightened because she doesn’t want to die then three aerial firemen bringing with them an ax, a long hose to put out the fire and the other rescuing the women and her little innocent child. The woman is already safe with the aerial fireman. The woman is on the tower trying to keep her baby safe she also sees THE PEOPLE BELOW helping to put out the flaming building. The people saw the woman up on the tower worried for the life of her child and hers. Her face is red because of the heat of the burning tower.
The story begins when I was having a normal day (for me which means it was most likely insane) and was desperate for entertainment so I searched up one of my favorite things, mlp. (pls dont judge) So I looked for a bunch of fanfics and came across the feared cupcakes. Don’t be fooled by the name it is (from what I’ve heard and seen fan art about) pretty darn spine-chilling. I didn’t watch it or saw (yes reference) anything related to it and thought it was something that wasn’t blood-letting. But later that day, I did something I regret to this day and is the one of the only reasons I am such a coward today. Find out next time! Just kidding. You can see that by the amount of text under that sentence. But anyways for you it probably won’t be frightening but I have a secret that make this that nudge to the pit of doom. I searched the words “Cupcakes mlp” in Google which forever changed me. The pictures were undescribeable and puts a whole through my heart when I see it. It makes me breathe so heavily that I can hear myself think. I literally fell off the sofa I was on. Even writing about this is about to make me hurl or faint from the thoughts of this. And with that I never typed the words Cupcakes and mlp in the same sentence again. Well except here, of course.
This would be my entry for a 250 words program
What so scary?
Don’t judge me.
Pls
…but later that day that I became a superhero. I felt like everybody was scaring at me, kept looking at me like I’m a moster even though, I’m not maybe it’s because of my red arm, sparkling legs, powerful body or maybe….my face looks creepy. I quickly ran back to my house, locked myself up in a room , crying beside my bed and praying for hope that I would be a normal human.” Wake up! It’s time to go to school” my mom yelled infront of my face…..it was just a dream.
There’s a girl name June. She is a happily person she’s always happy especially with her friends but most of her friends don’t look that happy because of something that no one can figure out. June know that she is the only person that always happy but she also wants her friends happy too. So everyday she do a lot of things to make it fun but her friends still sad. But today she didn’t do anything she just be sad like everyone else. But peter that day her all of friends are happy to talk, to play, and do something fun together with June. And yes June is more happy and happy with her friends but she still can’t figure out why last time her friends were all sad.