206 comments last week from Grades 3-5. Let’s get that number higher for next week! Well done to Thanya and Aviel for their great posts last week. Have a read of their work outside the teacher’s room.
This week’s task: Take a look at the picture below, and imagine YOU are on one of these ships.
Think: Why are you on this ship? How did you get there? What can you see, hear and smell around you? How do you feel? What is happening? Is there anyone around you? What are they doing?
Writers Workshop Goal: I will use a strong lead to draw my reader in. A lead is the beginning sentence that grabs your reader’s attention. (Examples include: a question, an action, a sound effect, some dialogue.)
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